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About Me Member General Fiction Writer Robert28/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 5 Months
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Pristine

Sat Nov 21, 2009, 11:37 AM
So, Pristine is released. It's the contest entry. I'm all "meh" right now, so I'm off to watch tv or something.

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I'm some random guy with some amounts of creativity and capable of writing up a fictional world with moderate detail, of course that is probably just my over-inflated ego. Likely my writing is atrocious and I'm as creative as a block of concrete. Although concrete has been made into creative shapes...

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:iconatypicalspider:
Thanks for the comment :D
:iconriptokus:
No problem. If I were more experienced I'd have critiqued it, but I didn't feel I could give you a fair critique so I just told you what I thought in comments instead.
:iconvain138:
Thanks for the fave, and for all of your help so far. It's really hard to get people to make good constructive comments on writing on this site.

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Have you made someone smile today?
:iconvain138:
-dies inside from happy- Thank you so much for the fave : D ^^

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Have you made someone smile today?
:iconriptokus:
Dies inside? I hope you will go to a hospital to see to that. All kinds of bad things happen when your insides die.
:iconvain138:
Hahaha, thank you for the concern.

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Have you made someone smile today?
:iconthefiendwithoutaface:
Your the second person I don't know that has favorited one of my stories! Thank you for the favorite! I write a chapter every day for at least one of my stories. SO enjoy reading, my friend!!

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Take a deep breath
'Cause it all starts now
When you pull the fuckin' pin
The shrapnel burns
As it tears into the skin
Ever wonder what it takes
To be questioning your faith
This is what it's like
When it happens every Goddamn day

Slayer- Flesh Storm
:iconriptokus:
No problem. I read the entire group up to chapter 8 of that storyline, and I actually like it. It's a gem. Maybe not the best thing in DA, but definitely a cut above the average fiction. Hopefully my marking it help others find it, since it is worth reading.
:iconthefiendwithoutaface:
Thank you for the help. And I know I'm no pro, haha. I still got a lot to learn.

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Take a deep breath
'Cause it all starts now
When you pull the fuckin' pin
The shrapnel burns
As it tears into the skin
Ever wonder what it takes
To be questioning your faith
This is what it's like
When it happens every Goddamn day

Slayer- Flesh Storm

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